Avis Analysis -- part 3

Continuing our look at some Avis' successes and misfires during the seminal years of its famous "We Try Harder" campaign.

Today, Avis takes a detour from ads talking focused on the customer to one focused on the ad agency:

Oh, it's clever, and the copy at least stays mostly on message, and its an interesting admission that sometimes Avis does mess up, but they're trying. Kind of raising and lowering expectations at the same time. But in the end, it seems more concerned with exulting the ad writer at the expense of the client. After all, Avis is the one whose failed in their duties, but the writer refuses to be a "paid liar" and gets to lecture the client about living up to these ads. "Or they can get themselves a new boy." (Must be a junior writer. They love to get on their high horses.)

I don't know if that's the first appearance of the "ad about the guys making the ad," but in the years since, it's become a worn-out cliche in every medium, whether it's the TV commercial about the guys making the TV commercial, the radio spot about the guy recording the radio spot or even the mannikin of the sign painter hanging from the billboard.

In fact, the apex of the "ads about ad guys" genre may have been this 1992 Nike ad, where the writer not only hand-lettered the ad, but used all of the copy discussing not the product, but his frustration at drawing the accompanying picture.  The term navel-gazing was coined for ads like these:


Actually, I think the "junior writer" on that Avis ad was Ed McCabe.
Craig McNamara said…
I was of course, making fun of the "me-centric" attitudes of junior creative people, but actually Ed McCabe was, I believe (I don't my sources on hand to double-check) the writer of Hertz's return attack on the Avis campaign (see part 5).

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